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Monday 12 September 2016

My weekend

In the weekend I was making  lollie lays with my sister and nana for netball prize griving.We made 20 lollie lays when we where done we played on or ipads.Then went out side to play we played hide and seek, tag, then my friend came over to play with us then my nana took us to the park. then we can home.
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  1. Leilani16 September 2016 at 10:22

    Hi Madison maybe next time you post you can add a capatal letter after the full stop. In your story there is a lot of then and maybe you can change it with a other word.Keep up the great work.

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  2. Sharisse Scanlan20 September 2016 at 22:30

    Oh wow, that is so cool that you helped to make the lolly lays! Well done for using commas

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